To me, you are as beautiful as the sea.
And like a siren cast ashore,
I heed your call.
...
I have watched your many faces change.
The still glassy calmness on the surface.
The rough, troubled waters further deep.
And I have decided that I love them all.
For you are the one I belong to, my love.
I have watched, countless times from beneath
This distorting film of water, those ships...
Floating thoughts, which I could never read.
Though I swam,hoping to see, yet only to know,
Before I reached the shore, that I could not resist
The hushing sound of your lullaby..
The waves, lapping soft, to caress my skin...
The gentle breeze at your soothing side...
I could only see, that I could watch, forever,
Those ships...dreams and memories, pulling me in
For even if, I cannot understand,
I'm still enthralled...captivated, my sea.
Only within you do I come to life.
Carry me away, sweet surrender, to your tide.
Thanks to C for sharing this poem with me.
Picture by Hotei ©
Whispered by C
This poem ist's beautifull!
ReplyDeleteHey bro, I've got another thing for you on my blog: http://breathe-for-love.blogspot.pt/2013/08/opa-obrigado.html
:)
Thank you Ricardo, 'beautiful' is just the best comment I could hope for, for my work...you made my day :)
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I really love your blog and I really like you! You are great!
ReplyDeleteHugs bro! :)
Hi Ric :) Thanks again for the Nomination :) Glad you liked this post, Thanks must go to C for sharing this poem with us.
DeleteWhat a lovely poem Hotei. I love watching the river/sea. It changes constantly and is never the same. You described it beautifully in this post.
ReplyDeleteThanks a million RPD C will be very pleased to hear you loved this poem :)
DeleteThe sound and the constant change of the sea, the moisture and the light reflection upon its surface can be almost "hypnotising".
Thanks again for your comment :)
I loved the poem and your blog too!
ReplyDeleteI'm following you ;)
Hello Amy and I welcome you aboard this humble corner of the net. Glad you loved the poem, C will love your comment :)
DeleteThanks again and Cya around ;)
Hey bro! I know that but... in some way I feel so sad and alone. It's like that I'm alone in the world, with no one to care or help.
ReplyDeletePoema bem profundo....
ReplyDeleteBacana!!!!
Obrigado. Estou feliz que você gostaria que o meu poema. ^^ C
DeleteA very beautiful poem. I love the sound of the sea. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, Balqis :o) All this positive feedback is very nuch appriciated ^^ C
DeleteHey bro! Thanks a lot for your support and everything! And Thanks a lot for the B-Day :)
ReplyDeleteI think I'll be ok, I just have to think a lot and see what's important for me.
Hugs!!
What mistakes have you done? I'll do that bro, today I'll try to feel good and alive. It will be fun, I think :)
ReplyDeleteWhat reply bro? o:
ReplyDeleteThank you so much bro!! :)
ReplyDeleteDid C, wrote that poem? Is she a blogger too? Nice one Hotei, thanks for sharing...
ReplyDeleteHey Cec nice to hear from you again it have been a while. How are you doing anyway?.
DeleteYes this is a post by C, she is not a blogger. Probably will have more from her in the future... who knows?!.
Thanks for popping by :) cya
Hello bro!
ReplyDeleteI'm always happy to read your coments, they really make me feel better! I'll follow my dreams and I'll make them come true! Because I think that I can do that. And I will do what you've said, I will try and in the end of the day I'll say that :)
You're great!! really!! :')